Talk:Campus of Auburn Academy
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Improvement review (2023-1-23)
As a standard article, this article is pretty good! There's not much to improve the article further; however, I would recommend the following:
- Remove the map from the infobox and place it at the beginning of the "Layout" section. Replace that with a multiple image template, as seen on pages such as Deadbush or Itokani. You can also put the crest below similarly to how flags are put below the images in town pages.
- Change "Getting around" to a more neutral name like "Transit" (unsure what word would be better to include walking paths)
- "See East Hall." doesn't link to anything. Also, try to not to directly refer to the page itself (unless in specific fashions where giving information about a table or symbols, like you did earlier in the page, which is good)
- Be cautious not to blend the role-play/lore aspects into the descriptions of areas, but I think you've got that mostly down from a quick glance(?)
Good luck editing! McYoshi26 (talk) 06:17, 22 January 2023 (UTC)