Talk:Lapis Bay Expo East Airport
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Featured article review (2022-11-21)
To improve the article, I would recommend the following:
- well-written -
Not done The article has some minor syntax issues, I can fix those before it is promoted to featured status if all other errors are corrected, so no actions are needed by others for now. - comprehensive -
Done - neutral - Done
- of a proper length - Done
- distinguishes between role-play and real aspects - Not done The Weather box template should removed. Other fictitious information in the geography section should be removed.
- stable - Done
- free of plagarism - Done
- lead - Done Other than some minor formatting issues, all of the information is there.
- appropriate structure - Done
- proper infobox - Not done Minor formatting issues, I can fix this issue before it is promoted to featured status if all other errors are corrected, so no actions are needed by others for now.
- useful images - Done
- proper formatting - Not done The page has some formatting issues and inconsistencies. Some issues that should be fixed include: pages should be only linked in-text the first time they are mentioned, players' username should be written in full (SimonScholar rather than Simon), and dates should be in a consistent format (preferably Month Day, Year). The table for check-in counters and flights should use standardized, simpler boxes. See Ventus#Flights and Siletz Salvador Station#Tracks for examples.
- history, development, or background section - Done
The main issue of concern that should be done by other editors is the consistency in the proper formatting. I will fix the other issues with the article so you don't have to. Expect these changes to be done later. After all of these changes, the page is on track for featured quality. Good work and good luck editing! McYoshi26 (talk) 01:27, 22 November 2022 (UTC)