Talk:Peripotamia

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Improvement review (2022-11-13)

To improve the article, I would recommend the following:

  • Remove headers in history section and add more content. You could add information on when major buildings, transit stations, the mall, and other builds were added.
  • The districts of Peripotamia should be in a numbered list. You can do this by using an octothorpe instead of an asterisk.
  • Move list of builds to a new section entitled "list of buildings". See Kolpino City#List of buildings for an example.
  • Add a photo to the top of the infobox. I would recommend a photo of the main island center that shows multiple recognizable things in the town.
  • Reformat transit tables to a cleaner style with different heading names and header. See Heampstead#Heampstead Waterport for an example.
  • Since you have the Peripotamia Mall and the Peripotamia Apartments listed as landmarks, you can make a landmarks section and describe each in those sections, possibly listing all of the tenants and franchises in them, respectively.

Good luck editing! McYoshi26 (talk) 08:41, 13 November 2022 (UTC)