Talk:Potoe and Chicke
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Improvement review (2022-11-13)
To improve the article, I would recommend the following:
- Review grammar and formatting in text. An example includes the extra parentheses in the lead sentence.
- Move creation history in the beginning paragraphs to a history section and expand upon it.
- For the menu items section, reformat it so it explains in text what is on the menu typically and possibly any menu changes that may be at certain locations. See CreeperCola#Menu for formatting.
- For your locations table, format it as it is formatted on Due's Food Station for readability. No need to name the owners of each location.
- The parent company section should be on a separate parent company page if wanted, otherwise, omit it.
- Images section should be reformatted. This could be moved to a new page entitled "List of Potoe and Chicke locations" with a long table with the images, descriptions, and other information you want to add and add it linked at the top of the locations section using main template.
- If you would like, you can add a section on the design of the store, which could include how you use the mayor and deputy mayor's heads at each location, the block palette, and the main idea behind the design.
Good luck editing! McYoshi26 (talk) 01:10, 14 November 2022 (UTC)